Nice music bad recording
You may not be into the same style as me but what you got here is exactly how I first started making music... Writing songs on my accoustic guitar and recording them with a peice of crap $10 microphone. The music is good but nothing really new to the ears and its only one track. Keep it up and if you don't mind, I highly suggest finding some people to jam with before you end up making trance music.
Yeah..You're completely right actually.
I'm finding some people and looking into better gear so I can start recording with my electric guitar. Thanks for the honest review. <3
nice
Pretty good work on that ol' guitar of yours. You dub a good melody on top of it and it would be a lot better. Maybe some bongos... yeah something, but the guitar work is good for being by itself.
Yeah, You're probably right about that. To be honest, I just came up with that tune and recorded it right after. I'm working on the song itself still, so i'll submit a better acoustic work later. And thanks for the review. :)
overdrive
"Might be a bit fuzzy on the heavy drum parts if your using head phones and not quality speakers." by saying this you might as well say you suck at mixing. It sounds way overdriven and you need to work on that because it sounded like you may have had something good going here. Only thing other than that is the instrumentation. A few effects and use of an EQ would help you a lot.
Yeah, Only reason this was submitted without EQ is I had a limited time frame, FL DEMO, and a comp that likes to reboot on its own.
Also I dont know how to EQ or apply effects in FL demo since I cant get piano roll. Once I get the program, I'm pretty sure I'll remake this with better clarity, samples, and of course EQing.
ha
you used a preset loop this automatically sucks a dickkk
Are you fucking stupid? I made the melody from scratch in the piano roll editor. I just listened to the real one while I did it.
Suck my dickkk.
nice
How did you make it so I had to download? You're a genius, I should do that to all my tracks. Haha, don't think anyone would bother with it though.
As for the song... awesome. I like a little Drum N Bass every now and then, and you did some good DNB. Maybe its the genre, but it coulda used a few more instruments I think. Still, 5/5 for this one.
I didn´t do that on purpose, belive me... usually, on other sites, it´s the other way around (so ppl can protect their work but let qurious ppl listen to it...)
Glad ya liked the song tho, there´s definitley room for improvement for it, I´ll think about how many instruments i use on my next song...
thanx for reviewing!
the m4ster has spoken
First I gotta say, I'm not good at writing reviews for good music. Well what is there to say about this - Awesome variations, good balance of frequencies so to speak (I can't think of a better way of phrasing that) and overall its complex yet compelling. I couldn't help think there was a small yet significant clarity issue. Maybe the synth(s) are just really distorted and sound overdriven.
Well, keep the good music coming. you've apparently earned yourself a considerable ammount of attention, and unlike some people on newgrounds (lets not name names)... you might actually disserve it.
thx for the review dude, yeh there is a clarity issue. If it was mastered I would of put a -mastered- tag in the description. There was way too much in this song and I was tired of working on it, so I did very mild mastering.
horrible
Stop flooding the audio portal with this crap. I know you could do better without even listening to the rest of your music... a deaf quadriplegic could make better music than this. With some effort, of course.
I know I could do better hahaha nice to see you comin to review my audio from time to time mayn, preciate it. I'll bring out better stuff.... in a month, I need to figure out somethin.
~)(~ Stay Flossin.
uh huh
Well I was turning down my volume slowly... but luckily for you the song was too short for me to get all the way!
Awww, well, i did my best.
too short
This is pretty good, just make longer tracks in the future.
Haha I'm surprised you liked it, thanks man. Yeah I'll make longer ones as soon as I get better at doing this.
~)(~ Stay Flossin.
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Put 100 monkeys in a room with 100 keyboards. Next, record each monkey randomly hitting on his keyboard for about 2 minutes. Last, pick out the best track out of the 100 that you've recorded and you'll get something like this song. Basically it sucks.
Say what?
Done.
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