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sweet more musac

Dang harsh reviews... well I didn't like this song as much at first, but now its one of my favorites.

Nice music bad recording

You may not be into the same style as me but what you got here is exactly how I first started making music... Writing songs on my accoustic guitar and recording them with a peice of crap $10 microphone. The music is good but nothing really new to the ears and its only one track. Keep it up and if you don't mind, I highly suggest finding some people to jam with before you end up making trance music.

BlueBurningTorch responds:

Yeah..You're completely right actually.

I'm finding some people and looking into better gear so I can start recording with my electric guitar. Thanks for the honest review. <3

nice

Pretty good work on that ol' guitar of yours. You dub a good melody on top of it and it would be a lot better. Maybe some bongos... yeah something, but the guitar work is good for being by itself.

BlueBurningTorch responds:

Yeah, You're probably right about that. To be honest, I just came up with that tune and recorded it right after. I'm working on the song itself still, so i'll submit a better acoustic work later. And thanks for the review. :)

original indeed

Can't say I liked it as much as those other guys but its pretty damn original i'll give you that.

nice

interesting song. I like it, especially the harp sound. The weird samples add some flavor. I think some effects and better bass is the only thing that could make this better.

overdrive

"Might be a bit fuzzy on the heavy drum parts if your using head phones and not quality speakers." by saying this you might as well say you suck at mixing. It sounds way overdriven and you need to work on that because it sounded like you may have had something good going here. Only thing other than that is the instrumentation. A few effects and use of an EQ would help you a lot.

Lesbian-Waffles responds:

Yeah, Only reason this was submitted without EQ is I had a limited time frame, FL DEMO, and a comp that likes to reboot on its own.

Also I dont know how to EQ or apply effects in FL demo since I cant get piano roll. Once I get the program, I'm pretty sure I'll remake this with better clarity, samples, and of course EQing.

ha

you used a preset loop this automatically sucks a dickkk

AngryFaic responds:

Are you fucking stupid? I made the melody from scratch in the piano roll editor. I just listened to the real one while I did it.

Suck my dickkk.

huh

Someone told me this song kicked major ass. I am not here to insult you, but I just wanted to say I very, very much disagree with that certain someone.

needs more

I couldn't tell at first if your drum work was horrible, or if the samples were simply annoying. I think just a little bit of both. Try working on that by getting some more drum samples and working on new, creative beats. The music was too simple. You only had one instrumeent at a time which usually shows no skill, but i think it has potential so keep at it. Once you get that down, get better with your effects and mastering your tracks.

nice

How did you make it so I had to download? You're a genius, I should do that to all my tracks. Haha, don't think anyone would bother with it though.

As for the song... awesome. I like a little Drum N Bass every now and then, and you did some good DNB. Maybe its the genre, but it coulda used a few more instruments I think. Still, 5/5 for this one.

Rucklo responds:

I didn´t do that on purpose, belive me... usually, on other sites, it´s the other way around (so ppl can protect their work but let qurious ppl listen to it...)

Glad ya liked the song tho, there´s definitley room for improvement for it, I´ll think about how many instruments i use on my next song...

thanx for reviewing!

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